An Expensive Drink|昂贵的饮料

An Expensive Drink

昂贵的饮料

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　　请根据以下三张连环图画的内容，以 "While urgently driving to work, Gary felt thirsty..." 开头，写一篇约 120 个单词的文章，描述图中主角所经历的事件，并提供合理的解释与结局。

写作小栈

1.   看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

           ＊描述文（description）→ 根据提示或图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

           ＊叙述文（narration）→ 笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2.   不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3.   善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可对图中人物的情绪变化多加着墨，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

Gary 非常想喝饮料，所以将汽车违规停在便利商店路旁巷子里的禁止停车区内。→ 他踏入便利商店，并未注意到有一名警察就在附近，并向他的车子走去。 → Gary 急忙跑出商店，手里还拿着一瓶饮料，并在后头追赶着他被吊走的车子。

故事结尾则是 Gary 从一杯昂贵的饮料中得到了教训。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定   主　题 A man's car is unexpectedly towed away.

      时　地 This morning, in front of a convenience store

      人　物 Gary and a police officer

写作大纲   引导句 While driving to work in a hurry, Gary felt like drinking something, so he stopped at a convenience store.

      发展句 图一    He had a hard time finding a parking space, so he decided to park illegally in the alley.

           图二    While Gary was choosing a drink, a police officer called for a tow truck.

           图三    Gary saw a tow truck hauling his car away.

      结论句 Gary learned his lesson at the cost of one very expensive drink.

 

范文

　　While urgently driving to work, Gary felt thirsty, so he stopped at a convenience store. All the parking spaces around the area were occupied, so he decided to park illegally in the alley. Running quickly into the convenience store, he didn't notice a police officer nearby. While Gary was picking out a drink, the police officer phoned for a tow truck.

　　In the meantime, Gary had to wait in a long line to pay for his beverage. When he stepped out of the store, he saw a tow truck driving off with his car. Shocked, he ran as fast as he could after it with his drink in hand. Unfortunately, he was too slow and had to pay more than NT$3,500 to get his car back. Gary learned a hard lesson at a high price.

 

　　盖瑞急急忙忙开车上班时，他感到很口渴，所以他把车停在便利商店前。那区附近所有的停车位都满了，因此他决定违规停在巷子里。他火速跑进便利商店，没有注意到有个警察就在附近。盖瑞在选饮料时，警察先生打电话叫了拖吊车。

　　同时，盖瑞还得在长长的队伍中等候排队付饮料钱。他踏出商店时，看到一辆拖吊车把他的车拖走了。他很吃惊，便带着手边的饮料拼命地跑在拖吊车后头。很可惜，他太慢了，所以得支付新台币 3 千 5 百多元才能取回他的车。盖瑞用很高的价格学到了教训。