A Rained-Out Barbecue|因雨取消的烤肉野餐

因雨取消的烤肉野餐

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动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  A barbecue got rained out.

时　地  A nice Saturday in Taipei

人　物  Robbie and his friends

发展句图一    On Saturday, the weather was fantastic, so Robbie decided to organize a barbecue with his friends.

图二    The sun was very bright and hot, so they felt uncomfortable.

图三    Dark clouds suddenly appeared and it started raining cats and dogs, so Robbie and his friends moved under a gazebo.

结论句  They all decided to go to a barbecue restaurant instead. Although the outdoor barbecue was ruined by the rain, Robbie and his friends still had their barbecue, and they had a great time hanging out.

范文

On Saturday, the weather was fantastic, so Robbie decided to organize a barbecue. He phoned some of his friends, and a few of them agreed to join him at a park for the event.  One of his friends brought meat and vegetables, while another brought drinks and desserts.

At the park, everyone was having a good time as Robbie prepared the food. The sun was bright and hot, and in no time they started to sweat, which made them feel uncomfortable. Suddenly, dark clouds appeared and it started raining cats and dogs. Because of the heavy rain, Robbie and his friends moved under a gazebo. However, Robbie forgot about all the food he had left beside the grill. He and his friends ran out into the rain, grabbed the food, and rushed back to the gazebo.

Since everything was a mess, they all agreed to go to a barbecue restaurant instead. Although the outdoor gathering was ruined by the rain, Robbie and his friends still had their barbecue, and they had a great time hanging out.

   At the park, everyone was having a good time as Robbie prepared the food.

星期六那天天气非常棒，所以罗比决定办一场烤肉聚会。他打电话约了一些朋友，其中有几位答应和他一起相约在公园烤肉。他的一位朋友带了肉和蔬菜，另一位带了饮料和点心。

在公园里，罗比正在准备食物的时候，大家都玩得很开心。太阳又大又热，很快地他们便开始流汗，那令他们觉得不太舒服。突然间，天空乌云密布，并开始下起倾盆大雨。由于下大雨，罗比和他的朋友跑到凉亭下躲雨。但是罗比把留在烤肉架旁的食物全忘了。他和朋友跑进雨中，拿起食物并匆匆回到凉亭下。

因为所有事情变得一团糟，于是大家都同意改去烧烤店。虽然户外聚会被大雨搞砸了，但是罗比和他的朋友仍烤了肉，并一起愉快地打发时间。