人人都爱名人
提示
现今年轻人崇拜偶像名人是一种不可避免的趋势,因此如何教导年轻人由名人身上得到一些正面启示便成为一个刻不容缓的课题,请以 "Everyone Loves Celebrities" 为题,写一篇文长至少 120 个单词(words)的文章,表达偶像名人对年轻人的影响力。文分两段,第一段点出名人对年轻人的重要性,第二段则列举名人对年轻人可能会有哪些好的及不好的影响。
审题
偶像名人对年轻人的影响可谓相当深远,因为他们的一言一行都可能成为年轻人争相模仿的对象。基于此原因,名人们更应该要多注意自己的行为举止,以期能成为年轻人的正面教材。
根据提示,可知本篇作文是论说文。论说文的目的就是要说服读者接受自己的观点或看法。基本上,这种写法是要『晓之以理』而非『动之以情』。其要点如下:
1.『论点』需站得住脚,否则很难说服读者。
2.『论证』宜讲求方法,合乎逻辑。
3.『论据』要真实可靠,不可似是而非或无中生有。
动动脑(Brainstorming)
第一段:名人对年轻人的重要性。
‧年轻人为什么会崇拜名人?
‧年轻人会崇拜哪些名人?
第二段:列举名人对年轻人会有哪些影响。
‧名人对年轻人有哪些正面的影响。
‧名人对年轻人有哪些负面的影响。
利用 2 W (why, what)
第一段 " Why do young people admire celebrities?
" What type of celebrities do they admire?
第二段 " What are some good things celebrities teach young people?
" What are some bad things celebrities teach young people?
结论句 Because of their great influence, celebrities should try to be good
role models for their young fans.
大纲
主题句: Around the world, celebrities have a huge influence on young people.
a. People love celebrities because they admire fame, wealth, and success.
b. People love to follow the exciting and glamorous lives of actors, singers, musicians, and sports stars.
c. Successful stars, such as Lady Gaga and Jeremy Lin, attract large numbers of fans from around the globe.
发展句: Young people can learn good and bad things from celebrities.
a. Regarding the positive, stars can motivate and inspire people to follow their dreams.
b. Individuals can picture themselves as Kobe Bryant on the basketball court or Tom Cruise on the movie screen.
c. However, young people may be negatively influenced by the bad habits of their idols, including alcohol or drug abuse.
结论句: Because of their great influence, celebrities should try to be good role models for their young fans.
范文
Around the world, celebrities have a huge influence on young people. This is understandable because people admire fame, wealth, and success. People love to follow the exciting and glamorous lives of actors, singers, musicians, and sports stars. Successful stars, such as Lady Gaga and Jeremy Lin, attract large numbers of fans from around the globe.
Young people can learn good and bad things from celebrities. Regarding the positive, stars can motivate and inspire people to follow their dreams. For example, individuals can picture themselves as Kobe Bryant on the basketball court or Tom Cruise on the movie screen. However, young people may be negatively influenced by the bad habits of their idols, including alcohol or drug abuse. Because of their great influence, celebrities should try to be good role models for their young fans.
在世界各地,名人对年轻人都有很大的影响。这是可以理解的,因为人们都崇拜名望、财富和成功。人们喜爱跟随演员、歌手、音乐家及运动明星那种刺激而迷人的生活。像是女神卡卡和林书豪等成功的明星吸引了大批来自世界各地的粉丝。
年轻人从名人身上可以学到好的和不好的事情。正面而言,明星可以激发及鼓舞人们去追寻他们的梦想。举例来说,人们可能会想象自己是篮球场上的柯比˙布莱恩或是电影屏幕上的汤姆‧克鲁斯。然而,人们也有可能会受到偶像一些坏习惯的负面影响,包括酗酒和滥用药物等。由于他们的重大影响力,名人们应该要试着为他们的年轻粉丝树立好的模范。