Finding the One Online|在网络上找到生命中的真爱

在网络上找到生命中的真爱

提示

　　在因特网的时代要和来自世界各地的人交友成了轻而易举的事，只要透过鼠标轻轻一点，你就可以认识各种形形色色的人。在线交友虽然方便，却也隐藏了一些陷阱。请写一篇约 120 至 150 个单字（words）的英文作文，文分两段，第一段以 Online dating offers good opportunities to meet people. 开头；第二段则以 Although there are many advantages to online dating, there are some disadvantages as well. 开头并加以发展。

写作小栈

1. 主题句引导写作（guided writing）必须使用所指定的主题句（topic sentence）作为段落的开头，以主题句开头后，接着以下段落所有的句子都必须支持这个主题的指示方向进行，也就是思路的发展要符合主题句，如此才不会离题。

2. 依据提示的主题句，第一段主要在说明网络交友的优点，第二段则是说明网络交友的缺点。

构思方向

第一段：说明网络交友的优点，写作重点在于 what和 who，以 4 至 6 句列举说明网络交友的优点有哪些，并讨论谁最能从网络交友中获益。

第二段：说明网络交友的缺点，写作重点在于 what和 why，以 4 至 6 句说明网络交友的缺点，并提及为什么大家对于网络交友需更加谨慎。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

利用 3W (What, Who, Why)

第一段  a. What are the advantages of online dating?

b. Who is online dating good for?

第二段  a. What are the disadvantages of online dating?

b. Why should you be careful about online dating?

结论句  If you are careful, online dating may just help you find the love of your life.

大纲

第一段引导句：Online dating offers good opportunities to meet people.

a.  The Internet provides people with the chance to get to know others from     different backgrounds.

b.  You don't need to attend any social events in person to make new friends. All   this can be done from the comfort of your own home.

c.  People who tend to be introverted make use of this platform as they don't have the courage to start conversations with others face to face.

d.  Busy people can also benefit from online dating because there are no time restrictions.

第二段引导句：Although there are many advantages to online dating, there are some disadvantages as well.

a.  The downside of online dating is that some individuals lie to earn people's trust.

b.  Some people might show misleading pictures on their profiles.

c.  Others might give the impression of being very rich.

d.  For these reasons, you cannot be too cautious about people's intentions.

第二段结论句：If you are careful, online dating may just help you find the love of your life.

范文

Online dating offers good opportunities to meet people. The online community is a great platform for acquainting yourself with more people than you would normally meet in person. Using the Internet to find dates is like having lots of friends who introduce you to others. Moreover, online dating is especially good for shy individuals who don't have many chances to meet other people. Even outgoing people with busy schedules can benefit from online dating.

Although there are many advantages to online dating, there are some disadvantages as well. One problem is that some people tend to lie. For example, they might show pictures of themselves that were taken a long time ago. Also, they might try to cheat you in some way. For these reasons, you need to be alert when looking for dates online. But if you are careful, online dating may just help you find the love of your life.

在线交友提供很好的机会能够结识许多人。在线社群是一个很棒的平台，让你能够比亲自见面认识更多的人。使用网络寻找约会对象就像是有很多朋友把你介绍给其他人。此外，对于个性害羞并且没有太多机会认识其他人的人，在线交友更是特别适合他们。就连个性外向但行程忙碌的人也能因在线交友而获益。

虽然在线交友有许多优点，但是也有一些缺点。其中一个问题就是，有些人往往会说谎。例如，他们可能会张贴自己很久以前拍的相片。另外，他们可能会试着以某种方式欺骗你。由于这些原因，你在在线寻找约会对象时必须提高警觉。但是如果你小心谨慎，在线交友也许能帮助你找到生命中的真爱。