Miranda's T-Shirt Accident|试衣小插曲

试衣小插曲

提示

　　请根据以下三张连环图画的内容，以 "Last Sunday, Miranda went to a shopping mall..." 开头，写一篇约 120 个单词的文章，描述图中主角所经历的事件，并提供合理的解释与结局。

写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊描述文（description）→根据提示或图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊叙述文（narration）→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可对图中人物的情绪变化多加着墨，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

Miranda在大卖场逛街时，一件很可爱的 T 恤吸引了她的目光→她在试穿时不小心把衣服扯破了→为了表示负责，她决定要把这件衣服买下。

故事结尾则是好心的店员给了 Miranda 折扣，让她可以不用花那么多钱。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  A woman tears a T-shirt while trying it on.

时　地  Last Sunday at a shopping mall

人　物  Miranda and a sales clerk

写作大纲引导句  Last Sunday, Miranda went to a shopping mall that was having a big sale.

发展句图一    Suddenly, a cute T-shirt caught Miranda's eye.

图二    As Miranda was trying it on, she heard a loud ripping noise.

图三    Miranda felt embarrassed, so she told the clerk she would buy the T-shirt.

结论句  Fortunately, the clerk was very kind and offered Miranda a substantial discount on the shirt so she could use the money she saved to have it mended.

范文

Last Sunday, Miranda went to a shopping mall that was having a big sale. When she entered, she noticed a lot of people inside a clothing store. All of the items in the store were half price. Suddenly, a cute T-shirt caught Miranda's eye.

As Miranda was trying it on, she heard a loud ripping noise. She took it off and discovered a huge tear in it. At first, Miranda thought about running out of the store without saying anything. Then she saw the sales clerk looking at her. Miranda felt so embarrassed that she told the clerk she would buy the T-shirt even though it was damaged. Fortunately, the clerk was very kind and offered Miranda a substantial discount on the T-shirt so she could use the money she saved to have it mended.

上星期天，米兰达去了 1 家正在举办大甩卖的大卖场。当她走进卖场，她注意到有 1 家服饰店里有很多人。店里所有的商品都在打 5折。突然，有件很可爱的 T 恤吸引了她的目光。

当米兰达在试穿 T 恤时，她听到很大的撕裂声。她把 T恤脱下来，发现上面有个很大的破洞。一开始，米兰达打算一声不吭就离开那家店。接着她看到店员正盯着她看。米兰达觉得很尴尬，于是她告诉店员虽然 T 恤破了，但她还是会买下来。幸好，店员十分好心地提供米兰达很大的折扣，让她可以用省下来的钱来补好这件 T 恤。