求职信
提示
许多人在求职时,常会面临不知该如何下笔将自身优点介绍给企业主的问题,反而写了一堆无关紧要的流水账。根据人力银行调查,企业主平均看一封履历只花『34秒』,所以除了本身优秀的才能及背景之外,如何写出一封简洁并吸引人目光的求职信更是目前众多求职者的课题。请写一封文长至少 120 个单词(words)的求职信给面试的人事主管,第一段简洁地介绍自己和过去的工作经验,第二段则写出为什么自己适合这份工作。信末英文署名请假设自己为 Trevor 或 Lucy。
写作格式
1. 日期(date)──如 October 1, 2012(美式写法)或 1 October 2012(英式写法)。
2. 收信人称谓(salutation)──如 Dear Mr. Smith,、Dear Ms. Chou,,或 To whom it may concern:(敬启者)。
3. 信件主体(body of the letter)──通常一般信件仍采用内缩式,商业书信多用齐头式。可在进入信的主题前加一些问候语(问候近况、询问健康,表思念对方等)。
4. 结尾敬语(complimentary close)──如 Sincerely,、Yours truly,、Best regards,等。
5. 签名(signature)──如 Peter Lin(应亲笔签名)。
动动脑(Brainstorming)
利用 2 W (Why and Who) + 1 H (How)
第一段 a. Why am I applying for this job?
b. Who am I?
第二段 a. How can I help your company?
b. Why should you hire me?
结论句 I hope to show you in person that I am very well suited for this position.
布局
第一段:引 言→ 1 句:回应雇主的征才广告。
自身简介→ 2-3 句:简述本身相关的工作经验及为何要应征这份工作。
相关背景→ 4-5 句:叙述自己的背景与所应征的工作有什么关联性。
第二段:影 响→ 1-3 句:向雇主说明本身拥有什么特质及才能足以胜任此职位。
等待回应→ 4-5 句:期待雇主在看完这封求职信后能给予面试的机会。
大纲
前 提: Write a cover letter to the company you are applying to.
主题句: Explain the reasons why you are applying for this job and why the employer should hire you.
a. Explain how you found out about the job opening and give details about your employment and educational background.
b. Provide further details, such as the personality characteristics that make you suitable for the position.
结论句: Tell the company you are looking forward to a job interview.
简函范文
October 16, 2011
Dear Mr. Linden:
I am writing in response to the position of assistant sales manager advertised on careers.com. I have a total of four years of sales experience, primarily in men's wear. I am currently a sales clerk for a large department store, where I sell men's clothing. Prior to gaining this valuable work experience, I earned a bachelor's degree in business from National Taiwan University. I also have a minor in marketing.
With my strong employment and educational background, I believe I am an excellent candidate for this position. In addition, I am hard-working, resourceful, and determined. I feel that all of these qualities will help me excel as an assistant sales manager with your company. I look forward to meeting with you at your convenience. I hope to show you in person how suitable I am for this position.
Yours truly,
Trevor Chung
亲爱的林登先生:
我来信旨在回复关于贵公司刊登在 careers.com 网站上业务副理一职。我总共有 4 年销售经验,主要在销售男性服饰。目前我是一家大型百货公司的男装销售员。在获得这份宝贵的工作经验前,我曾在国立台湾大学取得商学士学位。而且我副修营销。
凭借着我良好的就业以及教育背景,我相信我在此职位上是个优秀的应征者。此外,我很努力、能随机应变且意志坚定。我觉得所有这些特质都将让我在贵公司业务副理一职得心应手。我期待在您方便时与您会面。我希望能亲自向您展示我有多么适合这个职位。
崔佛.钟 敬上
2012年 10 月 16 日