A Bad Car Accident|一场严重的车祸意外

一场严重的车祸意外

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把这张照片变成三图连环漫画写作，也就是以这张照片为中间的图片，前面自己加一张图（之前发生了什么事），后面加一张图（之后发生了什么事），然后将可能发生的事件根据时间顺序列出：

事件发生之前：

两个礼拜前，吉姆和两个朋友去参加一场派对，庆祝他们大学毕业。他开着父母买给他的新车，载朋友到派对地点。

现在的状况：

在回家的路上，吉姆喝醉酒却又因为想要炫耀新车而超速驾驶。突然间，他因无法控制车子而偏离道路、滑下山坡且撞上一棵树。事情发生后，吉姆的朋友打电话叫救护车，救护车把他们全都送到就近的医院。

接下来会发生的事或未来该做什么：

吉姆不得不住院观察近一个月。他的新车也因车祸报销了。从此以后，吉姆再也不敢酒后开车了。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  A bad car accident

时　地  Two weeks ago; coming back from a party

人　物  Jim and his friends

写作大纲引导句  Two weeks ago, Jim and two of his friends went to a party to celebrate their graduation.

发展句假设图一    Drunk and on the way home, Jim decided to show off by speeding.

本　　图    The car went off the road, slid down a hillside, and crashed into a tree.

假设图三    Jim had to spend almost a month in the hospital.

结论句  Ever since then, Jim has not driven while drunk.

范文

Two weeks ago, Jim and two of his friends went to a party to celebrate their graduation from college. He drove everyone there in the new car that his parents had given him as a graduation present. Drunk and on the way home, Jim decided to show off by speeding. Suddenly, he lost control, and the car went off the road, slid down a hillside, and crashed into a tree. One of Jim's friends used his cell phone to call an ambulance, which took them all to the nearest hospital. Unlike Jim, his friends were wearing their seat belts when the accident happened.

As a result of Jim's stupidity, his friends had to take a cab home that night. Jim, however, had to spend almost a month in the hospital. Not only was he hospitalized, but his graduation present was destroyed. Ever since then, Jim has not driven after drinking.

两星期前，吉姆和两个朋友去参加一场派对，庆祝他们即将从大学毕业。他开着父母送他作为毕业礼物的新车，载大家到派对场地。在回家的路上，喝醉的吉姆决定要飙速来炫耀一下。突然，他失去了控制，车子偏离道路、滑下山坡并撞上一棵树。吉姆其中一位朋友打手机叫救护车，救护车把他们全部送到最近的医院。和吉姆不一样的是，他的朋友在事故发生的时候都有系安全带。

由于吉姆的愚蠢，他的朋友那晚必须要搭出租车回家。然而，吉姆却得在医院待将近一个月的时间。他不仅要住院治疗，他的毕业礼物也坏了。从此以后，吉姆再也不酒后开车了。