Extreme Pleasure Followed by Pain|乐极生悲

乐极生悲

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　　请以下面编号 1 至 4 的四张图画内容为蓝本，依序写一篇文章，描述图中人物的故事。你也可以发挥想象力，自己选定一个顺序，编写故事。请注意，故事内容务必涵盖四张图意，力求情节完整、前后发展合理。

写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊描述文（description）→根据提示或自己为图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊叙述文（narration）→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，亦即重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可适度加入图中人物的情绪变化，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

有一天，Mark和朋友为了即将到来的篮球比赛在练习→旁边有几个女生在加油，其中有 1 位是马克暗恋的女孩 Emily →为了吸引 Emily 的注意，Mark跳起来灌篮→ Mark 用力过猛造成脚踝骨折被抬上担架送医。

故事则以 Mark 很懊恼自己那么爱现作结尾，因为后来 Emily 跟另一个男生变成一对。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  Extreme pleasure followed by pain

时　地  One day, at an outdoor court

人　物  Mark, his friends, several girls

写作大纲引导句  One day, Mark was playing basketball with his friends at an outdoor court.

发展句图一    They were playing in preparation for an upcoming tournament.

图二    Several girls cheered them on, and Mark had a crush on one of them, who was named Emily.

图三    To attract Emily's attention, he tried to dunk the ball.

图四    Mark painfully lay on a stretcher because he fractured his ankle.

结论句  Mark was filled with regret over showing off.

范文：

One day, Mark was playing basketball with his friends at an outdoor court. They were playing in preparation for an upcoming tournament when several girls started cheering them on. Among them was Emily, a girl that Mark had a crush on. While Mark was distracted by her, his teammate Joseph made a three-pointer. All of the girls then jumped up to applaud.

To attract Emily's attention, Mark tried a slam dunk on the next play, and all the girls screamed. As Mark took in the joy, he felt a sudden pain in his leg when he landed on the ground. Someone called 119, and an ambulance soon arrived. Mark groaned in pain as he was put on a stretcher. The paramedics told him he fractured his left ankle. Although his team ended up winning the tournament a few weeks later, Mark was upset because he didn't get to play. What's worse, Emily and Joseph became a couple after he won the final game with a three-point shot. Mark truly regrets having ever showed off.

有一天，马克和他的朋友们在户外的球场打篮球。他们是为了即将到来的比赛做准备，场边还有些女孩帮他们加油打气。她们其中有 1 位是马克暗恋的女孩爱蜜莉。当马克因爱蜜莉而分心的时候，他的队友乔瑟夫投进了 1 记三分球。所有的女孩们都跳起来为他鼓掌。

为了吸引爱蜜莉的注意，马克在下 1 球试图灌篮，让所有的女孩们为之尖叫。马克沈浸在喜悦中，但着地时他突然感到腿部一阵剧痛。有人打了 119，救护车很快就到了现场。马克被抬上担架时痛苦地呻吟着。医护人员告诉他，他的左脚踝骨折了。虽然几星期后他的队伍终究赢得了比赛，但是马克感到很沮丧，因为他没办法出赛。更糟的是，在乔瑟夫以 1 记三分球赢得决赛之后，他和爱蜜莉成了一对。马克真的很后悔自己那么爱现。