A Big Fire|一场大火

A Big Fire

一场大火

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　　请根据右方图片的场景，描述整个事件发生的前因后果。文章请分两段，第一段说明之前发生了什么事情；第二段请根据图片内容描述现在的状况，并合理说明接下来可能会发生什么事，或者未来该做些什么。

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把这张照片变成三图连环漫画写作，也就是以这张照片为中间的图片，前面自己加一张图（之前发生了什么事），后面加一张图（之后发生了什么事），然后将可能发生的事件根据时间顺序列出：

事件发生之前：

我因为爸妈去参加婚礼而独自在家。看电视的时候，我突然闻到有东西烧焦的味道。打开门，我发现走廊上浓烟密布。我以为自己死定了，还好 1 名勇敢的消防员救了我一命。

现在的状况：

现在我正在外头，用氧气罩罩着口鼻。看着公寓陷入火海，我忍不住庆幸自己能活下来。

接下来会发生的事或未来该做什么：

我希望消防员能找出火灾的原因。此外，我和家人必须采取预防措施，防止未来再度发生这种不幸。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  A big fire

时　地  when my parents were attending a wedding, at home

人　物  myself, a brave fire fighter

写作大纲引导句  I was watching TV at home alone because my parents were attending a wedding.

发展句假设图一    The hallway was filled with a thick cloud of smoke.

本　　图    I am watching the apartment I've grown up in go up in flames.

假设图三    I hope that the fire fighters will be able to figure out what started the blaze.

结论句  My family and I must take better precautions to prevent this kind of event from happening in the future.

范文：

I was at home alone because my parents were attending a wedding. While watching TV in the living room, I suddenly smelled something burning. I opened the door and found that the hallway was filled with a thick cloud of smoke. I covered my face with my shirt sleeve, dropped to the floor, and tried to crawl away. I thought I was going to die, but a brave fire fighter came to my rescue.

Now that I'm outside, I have an oxygen mask covering my nose and mouth. As I watch the apartment I've grown up in go up in flames, I can't help but think about how lucky I am to be alive. I hope that the fire fighters will be able to figure out what started the blaze. Moreover, my family and I must take better precautions to prevent this kind of event from ever happening again in the future.

As I watch the apartment I've grown up in go up in flames, I can't help but think about how lucky I am to be alive.

　　当时我因为爸妈去参加婚礼而独自在家。在客厅看电视的时候，我突然闻到东西烧焦的味道。我打开门，发现走廊上浓烟密布。我用衬衫袖子掩面、趴在地板上，试着爬出去。我以为自己死定了，然而 1 名勇敢的消防员前来救了我的性命。

　　现在我正在外头，用氧气罩罩着口鼻。看着从小住到大的公寓陷入火海，我忍不住想到自己很幸运能活下来。我希望消防员能找出火灾的原因。此外，我和家人必须采取更好的预防措施，防止未来再度发生这种不幸事件。