An Act of Kindness|小小善行，大大帮助

小小善行，大大帮助

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　　请根据以下三张连环图画的内容，写一篇约 120 字的文章，将图中主角所经历的事件作一合理的叙述。

写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊描述文（description）→根据提示或自己为图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊叙述文（narration）→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，亦即重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可对图中人物的情绪变化多加着墨，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以叙述文来说明故事情节，构思出以下剧情：

我去赴午餐约会，走进捷运站时，外面正出着大太阳→到站后，当我搭手扶梯准备出捷运站时，发现外面突然下起倾盆大雨，很多人都在捷运站出口躲雨，我心里很着急，怕约会迟到→ 1 个女生正准备打开伞，于是我叫住她，问她是否可以让我共撑一把雨伞。

故事结尾则以女生好心帮忙，愿意让我共撑雨伞作结尾。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  An act of kindness: sharing an umbrella

时　地  Last Saturday, the MRT station

人　物  Me, a girl

写作大纲引导句  Last Saturday, I arranged to meet a few of my former classmates at a restaurant downtown for lunch.

发展句图一    When I entered the MRT station, it was sunny.

图二    After I got to my station and was riding the escalator towards the exit, I noticed it was pouring.

图三    I asked a girl if I could share an umbrella with her.

结论句  Thanks to her kindness, I got to the restaurant dry and on time and had a blast with my good friends.

范文：

Last Saturday, I arranged to meet a few of my former classmates at a restaurant downtown for lunch. Though a thunderstorm was forecasted for that afternoon, we stuck to having our get-together because we doubted the weather report. When I entered the MRT station, it was sunny, and nobody on the MRT had an umbrella, so I was relieved.

However, after I got to my station and was riding the escalator towards the exit, it started raining cats and dogs. I was worried about being late because the restaurant would cancel my reservation. Then, I saw a girl opening an umbrella. I rushed over and asked if I could share the umbrella with her to walk across the street to the restaurant. She hesitated at first, but then she agreed because she could tell that I was sincere. Because of her kindness, I made it to the restaurant dry and on time and had a great lunch with my good friends.

　　上个星期六，我安排和几个老同学到市区的 1 家餐厅吃午餐。虽然预报说当天下午会有大雷雨，但我们怀疑天气预报的准确性，还是坚持聚餐。当我走进捷运站时，天气晴朗，而且捷运上没有人带伞，于是我松了一口气。

　　不过，我到站搭手扶梯前往出口时却下起倾盆大雨。我担心迟到，餐厅会取消我的订位。后来，我看见 1 个女孩打开雨伞，我急忙上前，询问是否可以和她共撑雨伞走到对街的餐厅。一开始她有些迟疑，但之后她看得出来我很诚恳，所以答应我的请求。由于她的好心，我准时到达餐厅而且没被淋湿，还和我的好友们共享美好的午餐。