Is This Dog Mine?|这是我的狗吗？

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　　请以下面编号 1 至 4 的四张图画内容为蓝本，依序写一篇文章，描述寻获走失爱犬的故事。你也可以发挥想象力，自己选定一个顺序，编写故事。请注意，故事内容务必涵盖四张图意，力求情节完整、前后发展合理。

写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊描述文（description）→根据提示或自己为图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊叙述文（narration）→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，亦即重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可适度加入图中人物的情绪变化，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

柱子上张贴了一张寻狗启事→小女孩（Dora）发现一只小狗在垃圾桶旁翻找食物，而牠看起来就像寻狗启事照片上的小狗→小女孩把小狗带去还给主人（Henry Chen），主人见到爱犬满心欢喜→主人第二天打开门时，发现门口蹲着一只一模一样的小狗。

故事则以主人最后发现他原先抱的狗不是他的爱犬作结尾。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  Is this dog mine?

时地  One Saturday afternoon, on Dora's way to the library, Henry's house

人　物  Dora (the finder), Henry (the owner), Henry's dog Bingo

写作大纲引导句  One Saturday afternoon, Dora was on her way to a nearby library.

发展句图一    Dora saw a flyer about Bingo, a missing dog.

图二    Dora spotted a dog looking for food near a garbage bin.

图三    Dora took the dog back to Henry.

图四    The next morning, as Henry was walking out the door, much to his surprise, he found that Bingo was back.

结论句  He realized that he had made a big mistake.

范文：

One Saturday afternoon, Dora saw a flyer with a dog's photo on her way to a nearby library. It turned out that a dog named Bingo was missing, and its owner, Henry Chen, was offering a reward for its return. Dora moved on without giving it too much thought. As she took a shortcut through an alley, she saw a dog looking for food near a trash can. She moved closer and immediately recognized the dog from the flyer.

Dora managed to coax it toward her so that she could take it back to Henry. Upon seeing his dog, Henry was overjoyed. Likewise, the dog wagged its tail excitedly. Henry offered Dora the reward money, but she politely declined. The next day, however, Henry was startled to see his Bingo waiting outside his door as he was leaving to walk his dog. That's when he realized that there had been a big mix-up.

　　某个星期六下午，朵菈在前往附近图书馆的途中看到一张传单，上面有张狗的照片，结果是一只叫宾果的小狗失踪了。牠的主人陈亨利提供了一笔赏金作为找回爱犬的报酬。朵菈没有多想便往图书馆继续走去。当她抄近路穿越一条小巷时，看到有只狗在垃圾桶旁找食物。她靠过去后马上就认出牠就是传单上的那只小狗。

　　朵菈设法哄小狗过来，好把牠交还给亨利。亨利一看到他的爱犬就非常开心。同样地，小狗也兴奋地摇尾巴。亨利把赏金给朵菈，但她客气地婉拒了。然而，当亨利隔天要出门溜狗时，惊讶地发现他家的宾果在门外等他。这时他才赫然发现自己摆了个大乌龙。