The Bad Habit I Can't Stand the Most|我最无法忍受的坏习惯

The Bad Habit I Can't Stand the Most

我最无法忍受的坏习惯

提示：

　　每个人都有坏习惯，像是爱迟到、不注重整洁、爱批评别人等。请写一篇约 120 至 150 个单词（words）的英文作文，文分两段，第一段以 Everyone has bad habits. 为主题句；第二段则以 The bad habit that I can't stand the most is... 开头并加以发展。

写作小栈

1. 主题句引导写作（guided writing）必须使用所指定的主题句（topic sentence）作为段落的开头，以主题句开头后，接着以下段落所有的句子都必须支持这个主题的指示方向进行，也就是思路的发展要符合主题句，如此才不会离题。

2. 依据提示的主题句，第一段重点在于说明一般常见的坏习惯，像是没有询问就借走别人的东西，或是在公众场合总是大声讲话等，而对此你有什么反应。第二段则要描述自己最无法忍受的坏习惯，像是爱说谎、喜欢打断别人的谈话、吃东西发出声音或乱丢垃圾等，最好再说明原因加以强调，以及自己碰到这种状况时的反应，最后再描述事件的结果和自己的感想或心得。

构思方向

第一段：以每个人都有坏习惯为开头句，写作重点在于一般常见的坏习惯（what），可举周遭的人为例，说明这些坏习惯为何，以及你对此是否有采取任何举动（what）。

第二段：我最无法忍受的坏习惯为……，写作重点在于自己最受不了的坏习惯（what）以及原因（why），接着描述自己对这种坏习惯如何因应（how）以及对方的反应（what）和最后是如何收场（how），最后再说明对此事的感想或体悟。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

利用 2 W (what, why) + 1 H (how)

第一段  a. What bad habits do the people around you have?

b. What have you done about them?

第二段  a. What is the bad habit that you can't stand the most?

b. Why do you find it unbearable?

c. How do you deal with it?

d. What are the person's reactions to your actions?

e. How does everything end?

   Has this bad habit gone away, or does it just keep on bothering you?

大　纲

第一段引导句：Everyone has bad habits.

a.  My friend Jack has the bad habit of speaking loudly in public and annoying other people.

b.  My best friend Susan is always late, and my brother Jimmy likes to borrow things from people without asking them first.

c.  I've told them to change their ways, but old habits die hard.

第二段引导句：The bad habit that I can't stand the most is littering.

a.  My classmate Ted always leaves his food waste next to his seat because he is too lazy to get up and throw it away.

b.  Unfortunately, I sit beside him, and the things he leaves stink and are disgusting.

c.  I've asked him to keep his area clean, but he just ignores me.

第二段结论句：I really wish that one day he would realize how bad the smell is and throw all his trash away.

范文：

Everyone has bad habits. For example, my friend Jack always speaks loudly in public, which often disturbs other people. My best friend Susan has the bad habit of always being late. My brother Jimmy borrows things without asking for permission first. I've asked each of them to get rid of these bad habits, but old habits die hard.

The bad habit that I can't stand the most is littering. Take my classmate Ted for example. He is too lazy to get up and dump his food waste, so he just leaves everything beside his seat, which is next to mine. It disgusts me because these things often give off a bad smell. I have repeatedly asked him to keep his area clean, but he just turns a deaf ear. I really wish that one day he would realize how bad the smell is and throw all his trash away.

　　每个人都有坏习惯。举例来说．我的朋友杰克在公众场合总是大声说话，常常打扰到他人。我的挚友苏珊有爱迟到的坏习惯。我弟弟吉米则不征询他人同意就擅自借走东西。我曾经要求他们改掉这些坏习惯，不过实在积习难改。

　　我最无法忍受的坏习惯是乱丢垃圾。拿我同学泰德来说，他懒惰到不愿起身丢他吃剩的食物，所以他就把所有东西留在座位旁边，而他就坐在我隔壁。这些东西会发出臭味，让我觉得很恶心。我一再要他保持座位的干净，但他充耳不闻。我真希望有天他能明白这味道有多糟，然后把所有的垃圾丢掉。