Oops! I Forgot!|糟糕！我忘了！

Oops! I Forgot!

糟糕！我忘了！

提示：

　　大多数人都有因为某些原因而忘记事情的经验，请以 "Oops! I Forgot!" 为题，写一篇文长至少 120 个单词（words）的文章，描述一个忘记事情的经验。文分两段，第一段叙述自己对哪次忘记事情的经验印象最深刻，第二段则说明事件结果或内心感想。

审　题

多数人都有忘记事情的经验，可能是本身性格、过于忙碌或其他特殊原因所致；然而，忘记事情的严重性可大可小，有些仅造成自己或他人暂时性的不便，有些却可能导致令人懊悔的结果，甚至因此付出惨痛的代价。根据提示，可知本篇作文是记叙文，简而言之，就是在说故事。说故事的要领在于生动、有趣。除此之外，还须安排布局，要点如下：

1. 架构：不只记叙文，任何文体都要有一条线索贯穿全文。那就是开头（主题句），中间（发展）和结尾（结论）。

2. 角度：记叙文常用第一人称或第三人称的观点来叙述。前者以『我』为出发点，读起来比较亲切，后者以『他』为立场，叙述比较客观。

3. 顺序：记叙文最常用的是『按时间顺序』的方式来书写。这种方式最调理分明，容易把事情交待清楚。偶有用『倒叙法』来写，但初学者不宜尝试。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

第一段：自己对哪次忘记事情的经验印象最深刻，包含发生的时间（when）、原因（why）和结果（what）：

" 上个月我和朋友一起旅行，我因为急着出发而忘了带数字相机，全程都要请朋友帮忙拍照。

"  3个星期前我用瓦斯炉煮开水，但我却因为专心看 DVD而忘记注意看炉子上的水煮开了没。

" 前天我和同学相约打棒球，但我因为打在线游戏打到忘记，后来朋友打电话给我，训斥了我一顿。

第二段：事件的结果或内心的感想（what, how），说明整起事件对自己的影响或带给自己的教训：

" 虽然朋友把照片档案复制 1 份给我，但这次经验提醒我今后出门前要再次检查自己的随行物品。

" 我听到开水流进瓦斯炉时发出的嘶嘶声，才赶紧将瓦斯关掉，这次经验告诉我要格外注意使用瓦斯的安全。

" 隔天到学校，我向每位同学道歉并请求他们的原谅，这次经验告诉我要重视和别人的约定。

利用 3 W (when, why, what) + 1 H (how)

第一段  When did this event happen?

" last month

" three weeks ago

" the day before yesterday

Why did it happen?

" I forgot to bring my camera with me because I was in a rush.

" I was watching a DVD and forgot to pay attention to the pot of water heating on the stove.

" I forgot I had a baseball game with my classmates because I was playing an online game.

What were the results?

" I had to ask my friends to take photographs for me.

" I didn't notice the water in the pot was boiling.

" One of my classmates called and yelled at me for not showing up.

第二段  What happened in the end?

" Fortunately, my friends gave me copies of their pictures.

" I heard the water sizzle when it came in contact with the flames and rushed to turn off the stove.

" The next day, I apologized to each of them and asked for their forgiveness.

How did you feel?

" I felt things were not that bad.

" I felt lucky that something worse didn't happen.

" I felt terribly sorry for my mistake.

结论句  What did you learn from the incident?

" I should check my personal belongings before walking out the door.

" I should be very careful when using the stove.

" I should take every promise I make very seriously.

大　纲

主题句：    Forgetfulness affects everyone.

发展句：    Last month, I took a three-day trip with my friends.

a.  To record the most memorable moments, I bought a new digital camera for the trip.

b.  I realized I had left my camera at home when we arrived at our destination.

I couldn't help but blame myself for not making sure my camera was in my bag before I left.

a.  As I took in the scenic views, I sighed and felt disappointed.

b.  When we rode the amusement park rides, I had to ask my friends to take photos for me.

c.  After the trip, my friends sent me copies of the photos, so I didn't feel that bad.

结论句：    Forgetting my camera taught me a lesson.

I should always double-check my belongings before walking out the door.

范文：

Forgetfulness happens to everyone. Last month, I took a three-day trip with my friends. To keep track of the most memorable moments, I bought a brand-new digital camera for the trip. It was not until we arrived at our destination that I realized I had left it at home because I was in a rush to get going. As I looked at the picturesque views, I did nothing but sigh. When we rode the roller coasters and Ferris wheel, I had to ask my friends to take pictures for me.

I couldn't help blaming myself for not checking my bag for my camera before I left. Had I double-checked, I would have been able to take many wonderful pictures. After the trip, my friends sent me copies of the photos, so it was not that bad. Forgetting my camera taught me a valuable lesson should always double-check my belongings before walking out the door.

　　每个人都会忘记事情。上个月，我和朋友一起去旅行 3 天。为了记录最值得纪念的时刻，我为这次旅行买了 1 台全新的数字相机。直到我们抵达目的地，我才发现我因为急着出发，结果把相机放在家里。眼见美丽如画的风景，我只能叹息。当我们搭云霄飞车和摩天轮时，我只能请朋友替我拍照。

　　我不禁自责没在出发前检查包包里有没有相机。如果我有再次确认，我就能拍下许多美好的照片。旅行结束后，我的朋友寄给我照片的复本，所以一切还不算太糟。忘了带相机这件事给了我 1 个宝贵的教训每次出门前我应该再次检查随身携带物品。