A Nightmare|恶梦一场

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　　请以下面编号 1 至 4 的四张图画内容为蓝本，依序写一篇文章，描述照片中的男生准备考试的故事。你也可以发挥想象力，自己选定一个顺序，编写故事。请注意，故事内容务必涵盖四张图意，力求情节完整、前后发展合理。

写作小栈

1.  看图作文的写作一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊ 描述文（description）→根据提示或自己为图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊ 叙述文（narration）→笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2.  不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，亦即重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3.  善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可适度加入图中人物的情绪变化，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

Fred 深夜在家挑灯夜战，准备隔天的考试 → 之后在教室里参加考试，觉得考题很简单，有把握自己可以拿高分 → 出乎他意料的是，考试成绩居然只有 10 分 → 接着 Fred 从床上惊醒，才发觉这是恶梦。

故事结尾则以 Fred 为了避免恶梦成真，于是决定起床念书做收场。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定主　题  A nightmare

时　地  At night, in the bedroom, in the classroom

人　物  Fred

写作大纲引导句  Fred was going to have a physics test on Monday.

发展句图一    He decided to burn the midnight oil studying for the test.

图二    He felt lucky because he knew all the answers.

图三    To his surprise, he only got a total of 10 points.

图四    He woke up and realized he was having a nightmare.

结论句  Although he was relieved, Fred thought of the physics test on Monday and got up to study.

范 文：

Fred was going to have a physics test on Monday. His teacher warned him that he would flunk the class if he got another poor grade. Because of this, Fred decided to stay up all night preparing for it. Even though he was very tired, he studied hard in the hope of passing the test with flying colors. When he saw the questions on the test paper the next morning, he felt relieved because he knew all the answers. It was the easiest test he had ever had, and he couldn't wait to see his good score.

The results came out the next day, and to Fred's surprise, he only scored 10 out of 100 points. Then, his physics teacher started screaming his head off at Fred, saying that he failed the class. Suddenly, Fred woke up, only to realize this was a horrible nightmare. Although he was relieved, Fred thought of the physics test on Monday and got up to study.

　　佛莱德星期一有个物理考试。他的老师警告他如果成绩再不理想，这门课就会被当掉。有鉴于此，佛莱德决定整晚熬夜以准备考试。即使非常疲惫，他还是用功念书，以期高分通过考试。隔天早上看到考卷上的题目时，他松了一口气，因为他知道全部考题的答案。这是他考过最容易的考试，而且他等不及要看到自己的好成绩。

　　隔天考试结果出炉，令佛莱德惊讶的是，总分 100 分他才考了 10 分。然后，佛莱德的物理老师开始对他大声吼叫，说这门课他已经被当掉了。佛莱德突然惊醒过来，才发觉这是一场恶梦。虽然他松了一口气，但他想到星期一的物理考试，便爬起来念书。