A School Fair|园游会

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  请根据右方图片的场景,描述整个事件发生的前因后果。文章请分两段,第一段说明之前发生了什么事情,并根据图片内容描述现在的状况;第二段请合理说明接下来可能会发生什么事,或者图中人物可能会有什么感受。


写作指导

把这张照片变成三图连环漫画写作,也就是以这张照片为中间的图片,前面自己加一张图(之前发生了什么事),后面加一张图(之后可能会发生什么事),然后将可能发生的事件根据时间顺序列出:

事件发生之前:

大家集思广益,讨论该在园游会卖什么食物或商品。


现在的状况:

同学正忙着炸薯条或招揽客人。

接下来会发生的事或图中人物可能会有什么感受:

如果炸薯条很快销售一空,我们就有时间去逛逛其他摊位。此外,我们还很期待明年园游会的到来。


动动脑(Brainstorming)

故事设定主 题  A school fair

时 地  Today, at our school

人 物  My classmates, myself

写作大纲引导句  Our school fair is taking place today.

发展句假设图一    We discussed what to sell before the fair was held.

本  图    We are busy selling our French fries.


假设图三    If we can sell all our French fries by 3:00 PM, we will be able to visit the other stands before the fair ends.


结论句  The event is a meaningful and enjoyable one, and our team can't wait for the start of next year's fair.


范 文:

Our school is holding a fair today. Before the event, my classmates and I were brainstorming about what to sell. In the end, we all agreed that French fries would be perfect. As the fair approached, we started worrying that nobody would like our food. However, now that the event is beginning, we have to put our negative thoughts aside and focus on the work at hand. Some of us are busy cooking, others are packing, and still others are enticing people to eat at our stand.


Since customers are coming one after another, it is likely that we will be sold out by 3:00 PM. In that case, we will be able to take a break and maybe even visit the other stands before the fair ends. No matter what, we will all be delighted and proud of raising some money for charity. The event is a meaningful and enjoyable one, and our team can't wait for the start of next year's fair.


  今天我们学校举办园游会。活动开始前,我和同学们集思广益,思考该卖什么东西。最后,我们一致同意炸薯条会是最佳的商品。园游会即将来临之际,我们开始担心没有人会喜欢我们卖的食物。但如今园游会正式展开,我们必须将负面想法抛开,专注手边的工作。我们有些人忙着料理食物,有些人包装,还有些人招揽顾客来我们的摊位吃东西。


  由于顾客络绎不绝,我们的东西有可能在下午 3 点前销售一空。那样一来,我们就可以稍作休息,甚至可能在园游会结束前参观其他摊位。无论如何,我们都会很开心,并对于能够为慈善筹款感到骄傲。这个活动非常有意义且令人开心,我们大家都等不及明年园游会的到来。






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