提 示:
现代人随手拿起数字相机甚至是手机就可以自拍或帮别人拍照。请以 "Being Photographed" 为题,写一篇文长至少 120 个单词(words)的文章,文分两段,第一段说明自己对拍照的看法,第二段则描述自己喜不喜欢被人拍照及其原因。
破 题
第一段:说明对拍照的看法,以及拍照在自己生活中所扮演的角色;此外,还可描述自己喜欢拍何种照片、以及如何处理这些照片等。
第二段:说明自己喜不喜欢被人拍照,喜欢的原因可能是照片可以留住自己那一刻的样子,成为尔后美好的回忆;而讨厌的原因可能是对着镜头就浑身不自在、或很不上相等。
动动脑(Brainstorming)
利用 2 W (why, what) + 1 H (how)
第一段 a. How do you feel about taking pictures?
b. Why do/don't you enjoy taking pictures?
c. What do you usually take pictures of?
d. What do you do with the pictures you take?
第二段 a. How do you like being photographed?
b. Why do you like/hate to be photographed?
结论句 I prefer taking pictures to having my own picture taken.
照片种类大集合
个人照:individual photo
团体照:group photo
艺术照:studio photo
大头照:portrait photo
婚纱照:wedding photo
全家福:family portrait
趁人不备时的速拍:candid photo
* candid [ `kAndId ] a. 趁人不备时拍的,偷拍的
布 局
第一段:破题 → 1-2 句:自己对拍照的看法。
说明 → 4-5 句:以 when, what's more 等举例自己会在什么情况下拍照,并加上 1 至 2 句的说明。
第二段:破题 → 1 句:对自己成为被拍对象的看法。
原因 → 4-6 句:以 For one thing, For another 写出原因,并加上 1 至 2 句的说明。
结论 → 1 句:再次重申自己喜欢或不喜欢被拍照。
大 纲
1. 前 提:Taking pictures is a big part of my life.
To be precise, I keep the memories of what I do in a photo diary.
2. 引导句:I like to shoot my companions in scenic spots when we go traveling.
I am especially fond of taking pictures of sports cars and like posting them on my Facebook.
Although I enjoy taking pictures, I hate being photographed.
a. For one thing, I am not satisfied with the way I look in pictures.
b. For another, a silly picture of me made me the butt of my friends' jokes for a long time.
3. 结论句:All in all, I prefer to take pictures rather than have my own picture taken.
范 文:
Taking pictures is a big part of my life. To be specific, I keep a photo diary of what I do as a way to make the wonderful memories last. When traveling, I shoot my friends and family in scenic spots. What's more, I like to take pictures of sports cars, such as Lamborghinis, Ferraris, and Porsches. I then post them on my Facebook for others to see.
Though I like taking pictures, I hate being in them. For one thing, I am not photogenic because I always look older and uglier in pictures than I do in real life. For another, I once had a ridiculous photo of me taken when I wasn't ready. This silly photo circulated among my friends, and I was the butt of their jokes for a long time. Overall, I prefer taking pictures to having my own picture taken.
拍照是我生活的重心之一。更明确地说,我把日常的生活照变成日记,让美好的记忆永存。旅行时,我会帮朋友及家人在观光景点拍照。此外,我喜欢拍摄跑车,像是蓝宝坚尼、法拉利和保时捷等。之后我会把这些照片放到我的 Facebook 上供人欣赏。
虽然我喜欢拍照,却很讨厌被拍。理由之一是我不上相,照片里的我看起来比现实生活中的我更老、更丑。理由之二是,有一次我还没准备好就被拍了 1 张很可笑的照片。这张蠢照片在我的朋友间流传,害我有好长一段时间沦为他们的笑柄。总之,我比较喜欢拍照,而不喜欢被拍。